Tuesday, May 8, 2012

The Concious


His means are despicable and selfless.
He creeps through the dark of my soul.
I am weak against his artfulness,
call riot control.

His ways are nothing benevolent,
these scars on my wrist be the stigma.
Built upon a foundation of malevolent.
He is the enigma.

Evil and destructive,
who may he be?
His plans constructive,
he is me.



This is a poem for a writing prompt from http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/, rules were to write a piece between 33 and 333 words using the third definition of the word 'Enigma'.

enig·ma noun \i-ˈnig-mə, e-\

1: an obscure speech or writing
2: something hard to understand or explain
3: an inscrutable or mysterious person

13 comments:

  1. We are each our own worst enemy...

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  2. Holy shit, son. This is amazing. Where the hell did this come from? WOW. Double WOW.

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  3. Where does the apple fall? It's an enigma!
    (get it? i made a funny) LOVE THIS!

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  4. Dark, strong, focused and delivered with excellent purpose

    Loved it

    LANCE

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  5. Wow, powerful. Words well-chosen throughout.

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  6. So much truth in this! Excellent.

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  7. I like how you worked enigma in here and how it is about himself.

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  8. Very intense. Your words are chosen well.

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  9. I loved the contrasts you introduced right at the outset with " despicable and selfless."

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  10. This is very intense and powerful. Beautiful.

    ~Imelda

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  11. Amazingly intense and insightful! Enjoyed this:)

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  12. Dark, powerful, well executed. Well done.
    Thanks for linking up. We hope to see you back for the weekend prompt.

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