It wasn't the first time.
I've been here before.
I looked at my hands,
nine years experience on earth.
There is blood everywhere.
Their screams scared me at first,
they're quiet now.
Good night mommy,
good night daddy.
nine years experience on earth.
There is blood everywhere.
Their screams scared me at first,
they're quiet now.
Good night mommy,
good night daddy.
This in in reply to the Trifecta prompt which can be found here.
The prompt was to use 33 words excluding: 'It wasn't the first time'.
I'm hiding with Deus
ReplyDeleteEEEEEEEESH! Scary! http://wp.me/p2gpEb-bw
ReplyDeleteScary nine year old! (Glad she's not mine!)
ReplyDeleteAnna :o] at http://puzzelicious.blogspot.com
This is scary! And she'd only get scarier with the years.
ReplyDeletePuberty will hit like a baseball bat!
DeleteAHHHHHH! I don't like this one bit! (well written, but scares the crap out of me.)
ReplyDeleteIf this scares you then just keep an eye on my blog. I'm a horror turtle in it's shell hiding from the innocent, and soon I will be out of my shell and in the open.
DeleteCreepy. I may have nightmares tonight (behind my locked door) as I have a sometimes angry nine-year-old in the house...
ReplyDeleteMy kid turned 10 last week so I guess I can relax.
ReplyDeleteVery Menendez.
You can relax until he/she's a teenager, then, (and mom if your reading this take tips) give your kids WHATEVER they want!! Or run like hell...whichever you prefer. ^_^
Deletelove it! (what can i say, i've a kinship with the morbid) the last two lines sound so innocent and sweet, a nice contrast to the circumstance
ReplyDeleteDark. I like it. Thanks for linking up. We hope to see you back tomorrow for the new prompt.
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